How I Write—A Bit of Tickle for the Mind
by Melinda McIntosh 03/01/2014
.
I start with little bits
And the bits begin to grow
End to end
Hand in hand
The bits begin to flow
.
I never know which path they’ll take
Which twist and turn or loop they’ll make
I only know
For Heaven’s sake
I have to let them go
.
Not all of them are useable
Not all of them are grand
Most of them are mutter-clutter
And mutter-stutter sand
.
I keep the bits of mutter-clutter
And all the bits of mutter-stutter
Hoarded like a treasure trove
Of tangled golden bits I wove
Precious gems
Too good to pitch
Now junk plopped in a drawer
.
They’re bits of just-in-case-I-need-them
And someday I just might
In the middle of a poem
In the middle of the night
.
But today I’m moving on
With the poem now at hand
Trusting that my bits will wind
Beginning
Middle
End
To something that is useful
A bit of tickle for the mind
.
The sound I want is rhythmic
The thought I want is pure
Some filler-bits
And in-betweens
Will round it out for sure
.
No I never know quite where they’ll go
Or where they’ll find their end
But when it works
It’s mutter-magic
Like finding an old friend
Melinda … even your name sounds poetic. Thank you for reading me this poem. I have read it to myself and have discovered my own meanings as I took a moment to relisten. I can hear what you are trying to say. I find it gentle and sweet with a touch of meloncholy for all those lost bits of mutter-clutter.
Thank you, Ann! I was so happy to see you and spend some time visiting. I’m glad you’re finding personal relevance in the poem. On the surface it’s about writing a poem, but you’re right, there is broader meaning to be discovered by the reader.
loved your reading of this at writers group and love rereading all the phrases you crafted in detail. Thanks!
Thank you! And thanks for visiting my blog!
Fabulous
Thank you!!! I checked out your blog. I love your beautiful artwork. I’ll drop by again.
Hi Melinda: I love this poem! You have a light, elfin touch with the rhythm and language. May I post a link on my facebook page?
Thank you, Cindy. By all means you may post a link. I would be honored!